Monday, September 8, 2008

'Up' story

Wow…I can't tell how much did I enjoy writing this.

On Sunday (Sep 07, 2008), I reached home around 11:30 PM after 'Utsav' meeting/work, follow up and dinner with Yes+ group. Then suddenly thought of quickly jotting down a few lines in response to the competition that Bawa had announced for the past weekend. But once it started, it just kept coming until I realized that it was already 1:15 AM and I was also supposed to get up early for I need to go to Ashtavakra talks that I am attending these days.

I don't know how that 'Utsav' stuff (towards the end) manifested into words...but I am really enjoying reading that particular verse...:)


So here it goes the same 'poem'…(wow… I never thought I could write a poem…:)), with a small modification.


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Hurrying up, winding up office in his startup

Telling a story to his boss, he cooked up

Swirling his earphones that he hooked up

To his ipod that had back up of latest hits, he walked up

To the gym for some push ups

Chin ups and a few rounds of sit ups


Picked up the phone when his phone rang up

Someone he was soon to meet up, has called him up

While the call lasted, he was heated up & worked up

So charged up that not even able to speak up


Heart was split up after his break up, totally blown up

Thoughts messed up, emotions lit up and feeling stirred up


Enough of crying up after hours of digging up

Into the recent ups and down where he was caught up

Filled up with anguish, so stuck up & unable to open up


Covering up in his room what was his lockup

For he has stopped to turn up

Into the groups where he used to bottom's up


No way to cheer up and to buck up

No friend to mix up and no where to look up


Was finding nothing to boost up with thoughts rounding up

And rising up, in vain were all measures to cheer up


Almost given up, as if made up his mind to end up his life for he was up

To nothing and living a life screwed up and mucked up with goof ups


Suddenly a morning when he got up

With swollen eyes when he woke up

Saw a write up in a daily that was to make up

His life wonderful and live up

To what it deserve, for there was a photo showed up

Of a 'kid' who denies to grow up…:)


Mugging up that article, he mustered up

And lined up for 'Utsav' - a course he signed up

Four days four hours each were enough to shake him up

Bring things normal that were up

side down for him & to wake him up


Up front with 'reality', and sleeves rolled up

Up and running soon he was back correcting his run up

Ready to take up challenges again and geared up

To set up a meeting with destiny that itself has come up

To him to shine up and bring up smile of 'close-up'

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2 comments:

Faith Lasts said...

Too good. Every line ends with an 'up' . That is amazing.
Very well done and only in less than 2 hours!

Unknown said...

wow!!!!!! that is amazingly UPlifting....i had a good laugh.....i never knew you were so creative dude........keep those creative juices flowing:)