Wow…I can't tell how much did I enjoy writing this.
On Sunday (Sep 07, 2008), I reached home around 11:30 PM after 'Utsav' meeting/work, follow up and dinner with Yes+ group. Then suddenly thought of quickly jotting down a few lines in response to the competition that Bawa had announced for the past weekend. But once it started, it just kept coming until I realized that it was already 1:15 AM and I was also supposed to get up early for I need to go to Ashtavakra talks that I am attending these days.
I don't know how that 'Utsav' stuff (towards the end) manifested into words...but I am really enjoying reading that particular verse...:)
So here it goes the same 'poem'…(wow… I never thought I could write a poem…:)), with a small modification.
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Hurrying up, winding up office in his startup
Telling a story to his boss, he cooked up
Swirling his earphones that he hooked up
To his ipod that had back up of latest hits, he walked up
To the gym for some push ups
Chin ups and a few rounds of sit ups
Picked up the phone when his phone rang up
Someone he was soon to meet up, has called him up
While the call lasted, he was heated up & worked up
So charged up that not even able to speak up
Heart was split up after his break up, totally blown up
Thoughts messed up, emotions lit up and feeling stirred up
Enough of crying up after hours of digging up
Into the recent ups and down where he was caught up
Filled up with anguish, so stuck up & unable to open up
Covering up in his room what was his lockup
For he has stopped to turn up
Into the groups where he used to bottom's up
No way to cheer up and to buck up
No friend to mix up and no where to look up
Was finding nothing to boost up with thoughts rounding up
And rising up, in vain were all measures to cheer up
Almost given up, as if made up his mind to end up his life for he was up
To nothing and living a life screwed up and mucked up with goof ups
Suddenly a morning when he got up
With swollen eyes when he woke up
Saw a write up in a daily that was to make up
His life wonderful and live up
To what it deserve, for there was a photo showed up
Of a 'kid' who denies to grow up…:)
Mugging up that article, he mustered up
And lined up for 'Utsav' - a course he signed up
Four days four hours each were enough to shake him up
Bring things normal that were up
side down for him & to wake him up
Up front with 'reality', and sleeves rolled up
Up and running soon he was back correcting his run up
Ready to take up challenges again and geared up
To set up a meeting with destiny that itself has come up
To him to shine up and bring up smile of 'close-up'
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2 comments:
Too good. Every line ends with an 'up' . That is amazing.
Very well done and only in less than 2 hours!
wow!!!!!! that is amazingly UPlifting....i had a good laugh.....i never knew you were so creative dude........keep those creative juices flowing:)
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